MY night, Your Day

Don't tell me
why the sun deflowered the moon
and the rain the noon

Don't tell me
why the dew caressed the leaves
and the spring the green

But tell me
why your day kisses my night
and my night your day

Comments

olusimeon said…
simple and classy...
December 18, 2009 at 7:31 AM
Rayo said…
i love the way u write poetry, simple yet the imagery is so powerful...
December 18, 2009 at 7:39 AM
Molara Brown said…
You surely make a good poet...you pass the message across beautifully...
December 19, 2009 at 6:38 PM
Unknown said…
nice poem
someday...
lol
December 20, 2009 at 5:12 AM
Rick said…
Lovely. Well done!
January 19, 2010 at 9:28 PM
Chris Ogunlowo said…
Ogbeni, come & update this blog jare.

lovely poem.
January 21, 2010 at 11:38 PM
Kass said…
Your poetry is unique.
January 29, 2010 at 8:50 PM
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August 22, 2017 at 12:54 AM
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