The Duet

lingering kisses on honeyed lips
love tastes better than sugary moon.

rippling riddles on lustful tongue
love seasons like the noon.

sizzling duet on moist plain
love engulfs with fire like hell's room.

Comments

sonata said…
that's extremely romantic. i don't think it's quite as good as some of your other poems, but i like it's simplicity. good job!
January 11, 2009 at 3:18 PM
Toluwa said…
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January 12, 2009 at 3:51 PM
Toluwa said…
love ur description of love...
January 12, 2009 at 3:52 PM
Afrobabe said…
Makes me want to fall in love...
January 13, 2009 at 2:29 PM
Geebee said…
Okay now, that's what we're talking about . . . nice rhymes, nice rhythm. Simple poem but it exudes strong passion and romance. I like this. How you doing, deola?
January 20, 2009 at 6:09 AM
Unknown said…
are you in-love. glad for you
January 21, 2009 at 5:49 AM
Maithri said…
Wow, deeply sensual and beautiful words,

Blessings of peace and light,

M
January 22, 2009 at 3:24 AM
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